The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The graph illustrates the process of the generation of
the
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coal-based electricity.
Overall
, it is evident that the process involves 6 main stages beginning with the mining of coal, followed by crushing, transportation to the factor, and
lastly
the production of the energy. Looking in more detail, the generation of coal-based power commences with the mining from the mine of the coal.
After
this
phase, extracted coal is transferred into the crusher in order to crumple and convert to powder formation. In the 3rd step, grounded coal
transported
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to the factory by truck. Regarding the remaining stages, the raw material is processed by a gasifier for cleaning from the solid waste. Afterwards, the obtained gas is cooled by the cooler, before being heated. In the subsequent stage, gas is gone to the gas power plant so as to produce electricity, with extracting the heat waste.
Hence
, the generated electricity is ready for utilization in either residential areas or the industry.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • extraction
  • preparation plant
  • impurities
  • conveyor belt
  • turbine
  • generator
  • high-pressure steam
  • boiler
  • cooling tower
  • emissions
  • environmental impact
  • scrubbers
  • closed-loop system
  • condenser
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