The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph illustrates the process of the generation of

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coal-based electricity.

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, it is evident that the process involves 6 main stages beginning with the mining of coal, followed by crushing, transportation to the factor, and

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the production of the energy. Looking in more detail, the generation of coal-based power commences with the mining from the mine of the coal.

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phase, extracted coal is transferred into the crusher in order to crumple and convert to powder formation. In the 3rd step, grounded coal

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to the factory by truck. Regarding the remaining stages, the raw material is processed by a gasifier for cleaning from the solid waste. Afterwards, the obtained gas is cooled by the cooler, before being heated. In the subsequent stage, gas is gone to the gas power plant so as to produce electricity, with extracting the heat waste.

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, the generated electricity is ready for utilization in either residential areas or the industry.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

160 words

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preparation plant
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