The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The map below presents the evolution that West Park Secondary
School
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has gone through since its construction in 1950 compared to thirty and sixty years later.
Overall
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, half of the
school
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area remained almost unchanged.
However
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, the other half has significantly changed from 1950 until 2010. On the half side of the perimeter, the facilities did not alter much. The
school
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building did not change.
On the contrary
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, the playground was reconstructed to be narrower and shared the available room with the sports field in 2010. In the alternate section, there were major differences in 2010 compared to 1980 and 1950. The houses that were
initially
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present next to the
school
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building were demolished and turned into a car park and science block in 1980.
Moreover
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, in the same year, the farmland that was located near the houses underwent reconstruction to be a sports field.
While
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the science block remained untouched in 2010, the car park was expanded until it occupied the previously available area for the sports field.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words school with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "presents" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • renovation
  • expansion
  • modernization
  • infrastructure
  • landscape
  • facade
  • demolition
  • construction
  • alteration
  • amenities
  • accessibility
  • sustainability
  • curriculum
  • enrollment
  • pedagogy
  • architecture
  • commute
  • heritage preservation
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