A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/She has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give details of the course you took at the university explain why you recommend the university give some advice about how to apply

Dera Sarah, I hope you're doing well. I miss our
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to long chat about the math. I'm thrilled to hear you want to attend the computer programming
course
.
This
course
would be with
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Johonsen who is one of the
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in
this
field. The material
start
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with basic topics
such
as
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chart for solving simple math questions and would develop to advanced ones. The
course
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as you know
also
be provided out of the university in several institutes, but their quality is much lower in comparison with the university.
For example
, the
tutor
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of those courses as I know are
the
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just graduated students who have not
the
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experiences
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Mr Johonson. It would be better before the
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apply
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course
you review the Math lessons we had
last
term and another useful work would be to
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each
lessons
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materials
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to be fully prepared for the session. By acting
this
way you can't only gain better the class, but
also
you can achieve
better
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score
at the end
of the
course
. Let me know if I can
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help. Best wishes, Javad
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coherence cohesion
Try to improve the logical structure of your paragraphs. For example, use clearer transitions and ensure each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the task.
task achievement
Expand on your task response by providing more details about your personal experiences or specific examples related to the course.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are well-structured and friendly, which suits the task's requirement for a letter to a friend.
task achievement
You addressed all parts of the task and provided relevant advice on study preparation.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prospective student
  • alma mater
  • curriculum
  • faculty
  • state-of-the-art
  • extramural
  • scholarly pursuits
  • cohort
  • accreditations
  • holistic development
  • pedagogy
  • thesis
  • dissertation
  • prerequisites
  • mentorship
  • application portal
  • tuition fees
  • scholarships
  • financial aid
  • internship opportunities
  • networking events
  • career services
  • personal statement
  • deadline
  • admissions office
  • recommendation letters
  • portfolio
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