A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/She has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give details of the course you took at the university explain why you recommend the university give some advice about how to apply
Dera Sarah,
I hope you're doing well. I miss our
caught up
to long chat about the math.
I'm thrilled to hear you want to attend the computer programming Verb problem
catch-up
course
. This
course
would be with professor
Johonsen who is one of the Capitalize word
Professor
expert
in Change to a plural noun
experts
this
field. The material start
with basic topics Change the verb form
starts
such
as flow
chart for solving simple math questions and would develop to advanced ones.
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a flow
course
as you know Fix the agreement mistake
courses
also
be provided out of the university in several institutes, but their quality is much lower in comparison with the university. For example
, the tutor
of those courses as I know are Fix the agreement mistake
tutors
the
just graduated students who have not Correct article usage
apply
the
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experiences
Mr Johonson.
It would be better before the Replace the word
experienced
starting
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apply
course
you review the Math lessons we had last
term and another useful work would be to pre read
each Add a hyphen
pre-read
lessons
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lesson's
materials
to be fully prepared for the session. By acting Fix the agreement mistake
material
this
way you can't only gain better the class, but also
you can achieve better
score Add an article
a better
at the end
of the course
.
Let me know if I can any
help.
Best wishes,
JavadCorrect quantifier usage
apply
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Try to improve the logical structure of your paragraphs. For example, use clearer transitions and ensure each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the task.
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Expand on your task response by providing more details about your personal experiences or specific examples related to the course.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are well-structured and friendly, which suits the task's requirement for a letter to a friend.
task achievement
You addressed all parts of the task and provided relevant advice on study preparation.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.