The bar chart shows the number of visits to a community website in the first and second years of use.

The provided bar chart gives information about how many

visitors

were

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used a community website in the

first

and

second

year

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.

Overall

, it is obviously seen that during the

second

year

all of the months,

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August the number of

visitors

were

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the highest indicator than the

first

year

. Getting back to the details the highest indicator of

visitors

in

second

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year

accounted

in

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May, June and July. The number of

visitors

were

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approximately between 20000 and 23500,

by contrast

in September and October the

indicators

were the lowest and made up only 8000

visitors

collectively.

The

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remained months the

indicators

were

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average

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between 10000 and 16000

visitors

. The

first

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first-year

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year

visitors

were much smaller

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with

second

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second-year

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year

visitors

. The highest

indicators

were less even the average

indicators

in

second

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year

. The lowest

indicators

who visited

in

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websites in

first

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year

were in February and March, constituted only 1000 and 1100 respectively.