The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The given diagram illustrates the process of producing power from coal.
Overall
the methods go
throughout
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through
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four stages
started
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starting
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with making coal at home by fire and
end
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ending
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with
transformed
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transforming
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it
to
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into
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electricity in the factories.
To begin
with,
peopl
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people
making
fire
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fires
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at their home and
produce
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producing
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coal.After that,coals were collected in one place and cutting them to small pieces
by
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with
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crusher
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a crusher
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.
Then
it moved into factories
buy
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to buy
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big vehicles. When coal
arrive
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arrived
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to
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at
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Gassifier,They started an important operation.putting solid waste in
cooler
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a cooler
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place and it produces
gase
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gas
gases
.The second step is The gas power plant transforming heat waste into electricity.The
last
step
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is,The
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,The
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that the
energy is ready.It
distributes
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is distributed
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in all houses for citizens or for industries.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • extraction
  • preparation plant
  • impurities
  • conveyor belt
  • turbine
  • generator
  • high-pressure steam
  • boiler
  • cooling tower
  • emissions
  • environmental impact
  • scrubbers
  • closed-loop system
  • condenser
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