The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given diagram illustrates the process of producing power from coal.
Overall
the methods go throughout
four stages Change preposition
through
started
with making coal at home by fire and Wrong verb form
starting
end
with Wrong verb form
ending
transformed
it Wrong verb form
transforming
to
electricity in the factories.
Change preposition
into
To begin
with,peopl
making Correct your spelling
people
fire
at their home and Fix the agreement mistake
fires
produce
coal.After that,coals were collected in one place and cutting them to small pieces Wrong verb form
producing
by
Change preposition
with
crusher
.Correct article usage
a crusher
Then
it moved into factories buy
big vehicles.
When coal Fix the infinitive
to buy
arrive
Wrong verb form
arrived
to
Gassifier,They started an important operation.putting solid waste in Change preposition
at
cooler
place and it produces Add an article
a cooler
gase
.The second step is The gas power plant transforming heat waste into electricity.The Correct your spelling
gas
gases
last
stepAdd a missing verb
is,The
,The
energy is ready.It Correct your spelling
that the
distributes
in all houses for citizens or for industries.Wrong verb form
is distributed
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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