The graph shows the population figures of different types of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012.

The graph shows the population figures of different types of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012.
The given chart depicts the data about
of
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different types of
turtles
in India from 1980 till 2012. The chart involves 4 different species and the representation of their
population
.
According to
the graph, for the first 6
years
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years,
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the
population
of
turtles
was roughly the same and broke the point of 115, where 1 point is equivalent
1980
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.
Then
, some species have grown up,
whereas
others decreased or remained the same values. It is seen, that Leatherback
Turtles
extremely plunged during the years.
Thus
, it is a very rare type of
such
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animal.
Nevertheless
, Olive Ridley
Turtles
became the most populated
turtles
in India. In fact, it reached the point of 140.
Such
unbelievable statistics might show that conditions in India
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the most appropriate for them. Ultimately, Green
Turtles
'
population
remained approximately the same as it was before 1988.
Furthermore
,
this
chart represents quite huge differences in the
population
in
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each type of turtle.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words turtles, population with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.

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