You recently spent the week on holiday at your friend's house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter; - Say what you like about your friend's new house - Say what you enjoyed most about your holiday - Suggest when and where you could meet next
Hello Jaldip
I hope
this
letter finds you in the best spirits and radiant health. I am writing this
letter to say thank you to stay
at your home and Change preposition
for staying
gave
me your precious time.
I am very impressed Wrong verb form
giving
for
your new home which Change preposition
with
located
in Add a missing verb
is located
highly
demand area. Correct article usage
a highly
Also
, it's follows
Change the verb form
it follows
to
Change preposition
apply
the
astrology which is big advantageous for you. Correct article usage
apply
Living
room gives me a Add an article
The living
chnace
Correct your spelling
chance
spent
quality time with Change the verb form
to spend
your
parents. And, how can I Correct pronoun usage
my
forgot
our backyard dinner party which we really enjoyed.
Wrong verb form
forget
Small
town always gives a chance to collaborate with each other. I and your parents really enjoyed your community garden and nearest public mall which makes us happy and Add an article
The small
rejuvinate
too. Now, it's your turn to come Correct your spelling
rejuvenate
rejuvenated
in
my metro city and explore it. Next month is my birthday month I am Change preposition
to
invite to
you on my birthday. I will Wrong verb form
inviting
appriciate
to you if you join my party.
I hope to hear positively from your side.
Your lovely
UrvashiCorrect your spelling
appreciate
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Coherence and Cohesion
Try to provide clear and concise points in each paragraph. For example, focus one paragraph on the new house, another on the activities you enjoyed, and a third on the invitation and future meeting.
Language Use
Avoid minor grammatical errors such as 'chnace' instead of 'chance' and 'forgot' instead of 'forget'. These inaccuracies can impact the reader's understanding.
Task Achievement
The letter has a personalized tone which is suitable since you are writing to a friend.
Coherence and Cohesion
The greeting and closing are well-crafted, adding a pleasant touch to the correspondence.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,