The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Café, by season. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Café, by season.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The supplied bar chart indicates how much food and drinks were daily sold at the Brisk
Cafe
' in the
summer
and
winter
. A glance at the graph reveals that the highest amount of
selling
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was for hot
coffee
in the
winter
.
However
, individuals were not keen on purchasing iced
coffee
in the
winter
at the Brisk
Cafe
'. The
number
of
servings
of hot
coffee
in the
winter
at the Brisk
Cafe
' was considerably more than
summer
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in summer
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at just over 70, (which was the highest percentage of
servings
over the period) and 30, respectively.
Moreover
, the share of selling Soup at the Brisk
Cafe
' was slightly as twice
as
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the
number
of
servings
Soup
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of Soup
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in the
Summer
at 50 and 25, respectively.
In contrast
, people did not tend to spend money on iced
coffee
in a day in the
winter
very much, and the amount of iced
coffee
sold was approximately 1 at the Brisk
Cafe
'. (which was the lowest
number
of
servings
over the whole day).
Furthermore
, the rate of salad sold in the
winter
was completely the same as the
number
of
servings
salad
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of salad
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in the
summer
at 25.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cafe, summer, winter, coffee, number, servings with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Average daily sales
  • Selected food items
  • Seasonal variation
  • Trends
  • Fluctuations
  • Comparison
  • Preferences
  • Anomalies
  • Promotions
  • Stock adjustment
  • Seasonal influence
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