The table describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.
The graph displays the
number
of workers
and companies in two countries of the UK from 1851 to 1901.
Overall
, the number
of employers tended to decrease year
after year
, while
the number
of factories
was increasing. 1851 was the year
with the highest number
of workers
and lowest
Correct article usage
the lowest
number
of companies. The year
1901 had the lowest number
of employees.
The year
1851 had the highest number
of workers
, 477,100; however
, it was the year
with the lowest number
of factories
. In 1871 the employees were 3 times lower than in 1851 with a total of 140,123. But the number
of factories
was 3 times higher than in 1851 with 622 factories
.
The year
1881 had the highest number
of companies; however
, the workforce was smaller than in 1851. The year
1901 was the year
with the lowest number
of workers
, 61,000 and was the year
with a considerable number
of factories
.Submitted by daniruspi on
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