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The graph and the chart below show the number of students choosing different kinds of courses in a university in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and the chart below show the number of students choosing different kinds of courses in a university in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart illustrates the number of male and female
students
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 choosing different types of subjects in a university in 2012. As a whole, it is apparent that
social
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the social
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sciences
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 field attracted the most
students
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 of both genders,
while
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agriculture
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the agriculture
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 field represented the opposite status.
Besides
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, the figure
also
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 displays that men tended to
enroll
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enrol
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 in engineering,
sciences
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, and maths rather than women. Meanwhile, female
students
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 dominated in social
sciences
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, health, and humanities. In terms of the total aspect,
social
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the social
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sciences
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 course
catched
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caught
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 the majority fancy of both genders, about 7000
students
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. Followed by fields
such
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 as engineering, health, humanities, science, and maths, which ranged from 1200 to 2200
students
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.
By contrast
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,
agriculture
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the agriculture
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 course had the fewest
students
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,
about
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with about
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 200 enrollments. In detail, 4000 female
students
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 enrolled in social
sciences
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,
while
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 the figure
in
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for
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male
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males
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 was 3000 in the same field.
This
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 trend
also
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 was displayed in health and humanities courses, where the number of female
students
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 is always more dominant than men.,
about
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with
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 nearly 2000 female
students
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 versus 1000 male
students
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.
However
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, male
students
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 were predominant in engineering, science, and maths, approx 1200 to 2200
students
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, compared to 1000 female
students
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 or less.
Finally
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,
agriculture
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the agriculture
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 course attracted
the
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an
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 equal number of men and women,
at
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with
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 200
students
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, sciences with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "displays" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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