Some cities, public parks and open spaces are changed to the garden for local people to gow their own fruit and vegetables.Do you think it benefits move then disadvantages?

In few cities have started to change the public parks and open areas to gardens , letting

people

can

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grow

the

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food

,

such

as

fruits

and

vegetables

. I think

this

idea will cause out great benefit than the disadvantages. For the first

point

, it can be more health. The local

people

can choose the positive way to grow their own

fruit

and

vegetables

, adding

the

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healthy fertiliser, like eggshells and great soil. Reduce the worry about the

food

are adding some bad elements for grow which are selling outside. The second

point

, it can be more suitable for

people

.

People

can choose to grow what kind of

fruits

and

vegetables

,

it

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can link to their habits and

favour

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.

Such

as the sports

peolpe

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people

can grow some

vegetables

and

fruit

for making

joices

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juices

juice

and

salas

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sales

Salas

, growing

strewberries

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strawberries

who love it.

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People

can have more

chose

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to choose

.

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The third

point

,

poelpe

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people

can earn money by selling their own

fruits

and

vegetables

. After the

fruits

and

vegetables

are

grew

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, the local

people

can sell them to each other and even the visitors.

Make

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a

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example from

china

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, some

poeple

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people

will sell their own

grow

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goods

at

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the centre of the city,

such

as near the market,

those

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produces

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will be

more

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cheaper than the

produces

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sell

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at the shopping market. And the

sell

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point

is ' organic own grow

vegetables

and

fruit

'. The

last

point

is local

people

can eat

the

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fresh

friut

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fruit

fruits

and

vegetables

by getting

at

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their gardens. They can get the

food

when they want to eat.

Because sometimes

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we put the

fruit

and

vegetables

at home for a long time after

bougth

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buying

them, the reason is ready the

food

frist

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first

for

futher

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further

want to eat and can buy it.

To sum up

above

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points, we can see that it brings out many advantages, are benefit

people

's daily

live

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. They can eat the fresh

fruit

and

vegrtable

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vegetable

vegetables

which are growing by themselves.