The maps below show the centre of a small town called lslip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate Islip's existing
town
centre
and the plan for the development of the town
centre
.
It is readily apparent that Islip only has a single main road
across its' town
centre
horizontally, which is connected to shops and housing. Besides
that, there are also
roads to a school and a park in the south of the town
centre
.
Furthermore
, based on the plan of development, it is known that the city is planning to expand their road
connection by making a new route and adjusting the existing main road
to a pedestrian. The road
expansion will be done by building a new road
on the north of the town
centre
and also
connecting the route which accessed the school and the park. This
initiative leads to more infrastructure building as it provides more space in the town
centre
to build a shopping centre
and new housing. Therefore
, transportation infrastructure will be built, for instance
, a bus station and car park, which can be accessed from the northern road
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