The maps below show the centre of a small town called lslip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate Islip's existing
town
Use synonyms
centre
and the plan for the development of the Use synonyms
town
Use synonyms
centre
.
It is readily apparent that Islip only has a single main Use synonyms
road
across its' Use synonyms
town
Use synonyms
centre
horizontally, which is connected to shops and housing. Use synonyms
Besides
that, there are Linking Words
also
roads to a school and a park in the south of the Linking Words
town
Use synonyms
centre
.
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Furthermore
, based on the plan of development, it is known that the city is planning to expand their Linking Words
road
connection by making a new route and adjusting the existing main Use synonyms
road
to a pedestrian. The Use synonyms
road
expansion will be done by building a new Use synonyms
road
on the north of the Use synonyms
town
Use synonyms
centre
and Use synonyms
also
connecting the route which accessed the school and the park. Linking Words
This
initiative leads to more infrastructure building as it provides more space in the Linking Words
town
Use synonyms
centre
to build a shopping Use synonyms
centre
and new housing. Use synonyms
Therefore
, transportation infrastructure will be built, Linking Words
for instance
, a bus station and car park, which can be accessed from the northern Linking Words
road
.Use synonyms
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