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You recently travelled by train and think that you left some of your possessions on the train. Write a letter to the lost property office of the main station and include the following information: the details of your journey a description of the lost items what you would like the office to do and any other relevant information.

Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to inform
that
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you that
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 I have forgotten my personal items
in
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on
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 the train, and I request you to find those items. My name is Pramod, and I was travelling from Surat to Goa
in
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on
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 the Goa
express
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Express
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 train on 25th August. My ticket number is T22633. I left two of
belongings
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my belongings
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While
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 I was in a hurry to get off the train in Goa
druring
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during
 rush hours, I
forget
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forgot
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 to take
the
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my mobile phone which I left on my seat for charging. It is black in
color
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colour
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 and it has
Google
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a Google
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 logo
at
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on
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 the back.
Additionally
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, I
forgot
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left
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brown
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my brown
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 wallet
at
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on
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 the same seat and it has some of my
person
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personal
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 banking credit cards which I already have blocked. It has my driver’s license so
its
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it's
it is
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 easy to identify
its
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it
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 belongs to me. My contact number is 51211511, in case
if
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you need to contact me for more information. Yours sincerely, Pramod

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single idea per paragraph
Ensure that each paragraph contains a single idea to enhance clarity.
complete response
Provide a bit more detail about what steps you'd like the lost property office to take.
greeting and closing
The letter starts with a clear greeting and ends with a polite closing, maintaining a formal tone suitable for a letter to a lost property office.
logical structure
The logical sequence of the journey details, description of lost items, and contact information helps guide the reader through the letter.
suitable writing tone
The writing tone remains respectful and formal throughout, suitable for addressing an official office.
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