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There are plans to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local council. In your letter say where you live describe the problem say why you do not want the development to take place

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to oppose the proposed plans to expand the local
airport
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 to accommodate more flights. My name is Pramod, and I live on 25th Front Street, Oakville. To explain the issue,
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 the
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 benefits many local businesses and people, expansion of the
airport
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 could result in losing local parks and vacant land which locals are using for festive celebrations. I am against the idea of reconstructing the local
airport
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. As the local public park is located near the
airport
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 if the development takes, people will have no place to spend their leisure time and no place to play for local kids.
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, we have been celebrating national festivals in the vacant ground near the
airport
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, which will go under
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 jurisdiction.
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, it is important to discard the idea of redevelopment of the
airport
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. Hoping to take these concerns into consideration. Yours sincerely, Pramod

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Consider providing more specific details or examples to strengthen your arguments further.
coherence and cohesion
Try to keep one idea per paragraph to enhance the clarity of your message.
coherence and cohesion
The letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
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A polite and formal tone appropriate for writing to the local council.
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Clearly stated objections to the airport expansion.
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