It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. Dinosaur, dodos…) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

It is explicit that a lot of

species

had been

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disappeared

due to

the climate change caused by human

species

. Some

people

believe that

humans

are not responsible for

this

extinction.

However

, I aggressively assert that

people

have to protect nature

due to

the responsibility that

humans

have

done

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and

sustainability

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the sustainability

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of

human

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the human

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species

.

Firstly

,

humans

have been predators of nature for a long time and are accused of most of the

destroiation

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destruction

. Especially, since the 19th century, when industrialization began,

people

have conducted lots of harm to nature.

For example

, fossils have been used as

the

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human critical resources and fossils are one of the causes of climate change.

Furthermore

, a variety of

species

are helpful for human sustainability. Because animal

species

are important

humans'

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food resources and medical materials.

For example

,

mostly

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most

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consumed animal

species

of

people

are concentrated to a few

species

,

such

as cow, pig, and chicken.

Consequently

,

this

could cause severe failure of food control and lead to

a

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global starvation. In conclusion,

responsibility

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the responsibility

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for destroying

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the eco

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eco system

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ecosystem

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and

necessity

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the necessity

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to protect future resources apparently support my viewpoint. For these reasons, it is evident that

people

must protect various animal

species

from disappearing. disagree - 19세기의 산업화부터 인간은 여러 종의 멸종에 관여해왔다. 책임이 없다 볼 수 없다. - 다양한 종은 인간에게도 도움이 된다. 의학적 지식의 원천이며, 인간의 보존을 위한 식량 자원이 될 것이다.