The chart below shows the number of three types of visitor to a museum between 1997 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of three types of visitor to a museum between 1997 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart compares data about how many people who were from 3 various groups namely, adults, children, and special
visitors
visited a museum from 1997 to 2012.
Overall
, it was important that the trend of all factors other than young generations increased over the period of 15 years.
According to
the diagram, in the beginning, the total number of
visitors
hit 448,100;
then
they jumped somewhat and peaked at 525,000 in 2007;
nevertheless
, they declined to 504,300. the adult
visitors
, the main population who went to the museum at all times, had the same fashion as the total
visitors
owing to the fact that at the start, they hit 300,100;
then
they climbed moderately and reached the vertex at 400,500 in 2007;
however
, it reduced slightly to 380,000 in 2012. The graph demonstrates that the second group was the community whose ages were under 15;
moreover
, it touched 120,000 in 1997;
thereafter
, it went down slightly to 82,300 in 2012. special exhibition
visitors
scored 28,000 in 1997 after that, it rose marginally to 42,000 in 2012.
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