The chart below gives information about levels of education by age range in Glasgow in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs depict the information on education level by age and gender in Galesgow in the year 2010. Units are measured in percentage.
Overall
, literacy rates declined as the age grew up and older individuals had a minimum level of school certificates. Nevertheless
, men had a little higher university
degree than women and a higher number of women had no educational qualifications.
To begin
with, people aged 16-24 and 35-50 had shown similar in the percentage in literacy rates with 71% being graduates. On the other hands76% of the respondents had university
degrees who ranged between 24-35 years of age which is the highest among all other ages. Additionally
, 50% of citizens aged from 50-75 had university
degrees which is double that of the resident
who are aged more than 75.
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residents
Furthermore
, both males and females showed a similar proportion of having school certificates which is one-third of the graphs. However
, 3% more males have university
certificates compared to females. In addition
, more than one-third of women had no formal education which is 38 per cent which is higher than that of males.Submitted by jisan.path1506605 on
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