The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.

The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.
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The chart illustrates steps in the production of
bricks
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which are used for the building industry. We can see that
bricks
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are made using three main raw materials and the manufacturing process consists of seven distinct stages.
At the first stage
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in the production of
bricks
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, clay is excavated using a digger and transported to a material grid where it is processed using a roller.
The next step is
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to blend clay with sand and water.
Next,
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the mixture is
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shaped into
bricks
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using either a wine cutter or a mould. Once shaped, the
bricks
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are placed in a drying oven to remove moisture, as they still contain a large amount of water. After being dried for 24 to 48 hours, the
bricks
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are
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transferred to a kiln, where they are heated in two phases: first at a moderate temperature of 220-980, followed by a higher temperature range of 870-1300. In the final stage, the hot
bricks
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are placed in a cooling chamber to lower their temperature before they are packaged and ready for delivery to the construction site.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bricks with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • manufacture
  • bricks
  • building industry
  • process
  • dig
  • prepare
  • clay
  • mold
  • shape
  • dry
  • fire
  • kiln
  • cool
  • package
  • fired
  • overview
  • importance
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