The pie charts below show how general household costs were broken down in a certain city in both 2017 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show how general household costs were broken down in a certain city in both 2017 and 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given circle graphs illustrate how living costs were shared in a particular country.
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, the data were recorded for two years, 2017 and 2018.
Overall
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, there were slight changes if we compare 5 types of expenses for 2 years.
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, there wasn’t any variation in the household bills which was 18%.
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with, the rent or house purchasing expenditures were 32% in 2017 and dwindled to 25% in 2018,
nevertheless
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, it was the highest one all the time.
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, the money spent
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groceries was 18% in 2017 and increased to 24% in 2018 which was very close to the percentage of hiring or home buying. Looking at entertainment,
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schooling payments in detail, we observed a 5% increment from 10% and a 4% decrease from 22% respectively. From the pie charts, we witnessed the amount paid for the market rose more compared to the other ones.
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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • portion
  • accounted for
  • largest segment
  • percentage
  • notable increase
  • dedicated to
  • remained relatively stable
  • highlighting consistency
  • expenses decreased
  • shift in spending priorities
  • remained constant
  • illustrating no significant change
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