The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph below illustrates the number of shop
closures
and openings
in one country between 2011 and 2018.
To begin
, in 2011 there was
8500 Change the verb form
were
openings
, however
, 6500 shops
closure
. Replace the word
closed
Moreover
, there is
4000 new Wrong verb form
were
shops
in 2012 whereas
, there was
6000 Change the verb form
were
closures
. In addition
, in 2015 there was a big drop in shops
closure with only 500 shops
, and 4000 shops
opened. Furthermore
, in 2016 and 2017 there is a close number of shop closures
as well as
openings
. Finally
, in 2018 there is
5000 Correct subject-verb agreement
are
closures
and 3000 openings
.
In conclusion, the graph clarify
the change in Change the verb form
clarifies
number
of new Change the article
a number
the number
shops
and the closure of them.Submitted by lamahejoury on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words closures, openings, shops with synonyms.
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