Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. However, others believe that schools are the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own thoughts.

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of good

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should be taught by parents,

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others argue that tutors have to be accountable for providing

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. Even though educational establishments are excellent places to practice the concept of right and wrong, from my perspective,

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crucial schooling must start in early childhood. It is an undeniable fact that schools are the first rehearsal

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of practising real life. Children are able to meet their peers, communicate with each other, and play

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groups. In

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context, kids gain a more significant autonomy in comparison

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home lives.

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they are observed by their parents and likely to be spoiled at home,

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school, there are numerous children like them in equal

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, in an atmosphere

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everyone is equal, kids are

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to face the consequences of their actions.

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situation allows them to learn in person. Take a rude boy as an example. If he continues to behave

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, he will be deserted by his mates.

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, in order not to raise a rude boy,

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must be provided by parents since information learned in early childhood is likely to turn into permanent attitudes.

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is of paramount importance to offspring as it shapes their future character.

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, teaching kindness can be started

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the end of the toddler stage. As we consider kindness

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the largest proportion of being a nice person, ensuring that

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is received properly is a massive step to

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a brilliant individual. In conclusion, schools are crucial to

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parental

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; yet,

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must be given as early as possible by families and

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will be provided by schools.