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The table and chart below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 on one area of Britian. The table shows where the money came from and chart show how it was distributed.

The table and chart below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 on one area of Britian. The table shows where the money came from and chart show how it was distributed.
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The given table demonstrates data on the how many financial conditions of police in 3 categories with a total between 2017 and 2018
while
 in pie charts illustrate the percentage of the way
how
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these 3 one
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this 3 one
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 spent money in one area of
Britian
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Britain
.
Overall
, it can be
obviously
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 that the quantity of national government increased noticeably;
similarly
, that of 
in
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local taxes experienced a considerable rise in the period from 2018 to 2018.
Howewer
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However
,
this
 figure in other sources remained unchanged in the same years
whereas
 the proportion of salaries went down significantly, having remained dominant.
In contrast
, the technology went up over the double. When it comes to the quantity of
national
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 government budget in the period between 2017 and 2018, it increased marginally from 175.5m to 177.1m, having remained dominant;
likewise
, the figure in local taxes experienced a noticeable rise from 81.2m to 102.3m.
However
, the amount of other sources remained almost stable from 38m to 38.5m in the given period. As regards the fraction of salaries between 2017 and 2018, it decreased steadily from 75% to 65%, having been the main holder.
However
, the technology sector experienced a significant rise from 6% to 14%.Interestingly, in the given
yaers
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years
year
, the ratio of buildings and transport remained the same at 17%.
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Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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