The chart below shows the changes that took place in 3 different areas of crime in newport city centre from 2003 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the changes that took place in 3 different areas of crime in newport city centre from 2003 to 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart presents data on the changing rates of different crimes in the
newport
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city centre over a period of nine years.
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, we can observe that the burglary crime documented the highest
number
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of
incidents
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,
while
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the two other crimes had fluctuating rates over the entire period.
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the
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burglary
incidents
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was
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the most
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common crime
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committed in the first two years,
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decreased significantly to reach 1100
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number of
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incidents
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in the year of 2008, afterword, it remained static in the
last
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four years.
On the other hand
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, the
number
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of
the
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robbery
incidents
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did not exceed more than 1000
incidents
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and neither less than 500
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, it
flucuated
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fluctuated
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between them, and the same pattern for the burglary
incidents
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but with a wider range
number
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of
incidents
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, which did not reach over than 3000
incidents
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and under 2000
incidents
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,
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, it recorded the highest
number
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of
incidents
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at the end
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of the period.
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