The chart below shows the changes that took place in 3 different areas of crime in newport city centre from 2003 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart presents data on the changing rates of different crimes in the
newport
city centre over a period of nine years.
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Newport
Overall
, we can observe that the burglary crime documented the highest Linking Words
number
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incidents
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while
the two other crimes had fluctuating rates over the entire period.
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the
burglary Correct article usage
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incidents
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was
the most Correct subject-verb agreement
were
crime
committed in the first two years, Correct word choice
common crime
then
decreased significantly to reach 1100 Linking Words
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number of
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incidents
in the year of 2008, afterword, it remained static in the Use synonyms
last
four years.
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On the other hand
, the Linking Words
number
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the
robbery Correct article usage
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incidents
did not exceed more than 1000 Use synonyms
incidents
and neither less than 500 Use synonyms
incidents
, it Use synonyms
flucuated
between them, and the same pattern for the burglary Correct your spelling
fluctuated
fluctuate
incidents
but with a wider range Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
incidents
, which did not reach over than 3000 Use synonyms
incidents
and under 2000 Use synonyms
incidents
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However
, it recorded the highest Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
incidents
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at the end
of the period.Linking Words
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