Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras. In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

It is ubiquitous that lots of digital monitoring systems are installed for a safe society in public, but the majority of people do not know whether their information is being recorded.

Although

they could infringe on personal rights respectively, looking

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the universal perspective, it would be useful to keep our magnificent society physically secure.

On the other hand

, technology related to private life can invade individual data,

such

as cell phone tracking and security cameras. Because those programmes are not only used for common intentions but

also

for commercial purposes.

Besides

, it is not even sure that personal records regulated by governments would not be open.

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, there were some cases

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government

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disclosed the third one’s information to earn money.

Nevertheless

, having a well-rounded security system

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would be advantageous for

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worthy cause. Because it could rather prevent more brutal crimes by using those means.

Also

, it can foster welfare programs for the elderly or citizens who are marginalized from

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.

For instance

, cell phone and card usage tracking

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in investigating people who disappeared.

Also

as the average expectancy grows, the number of aged living alone is increasing. So it could be the

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to defend those in the blind spot. In conclusion, there are possibilities whoever could be the victims of abused technology.

However

, I support not using monitoring systems in public for the reasons only

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disregard for rights too conservative. One’s life can be protected once

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network is stable and the gross

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security degree could be higher

otherwise

we use those tools.