The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourists Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourists Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
The line graph illustrates data about the survey being taken by the Tourist Information Office in four different ways: in
person
, by letter and email, and by telephone within a six-month
period
in the year 2011.
Overall
, it is seen that the
numbers
for
in
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person
enquiries exceeded the remaining categories,
with
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being the dominant by the end of the
period
,
whereas
the
numbers
for
letter
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and email had a downward trend over the
period
shown. Looking at the details, taking surveys in
person
began its trend at a minimum
420
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in the beginning before reaching a high peak of 1430 by the month
June
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( it was the highest ). The category telephone,
on the other hand
, increased noticeably to 1600 by the end of the given
period
, after decreasing slightly from 850 to 800 and growing to 1000 in April.
Conversely
, despite showing high
numbers
, survey
numbers
for telephone couldn’t soar that
in
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person
highlighted. Of the
last
category, the enquirers being taken by letter and email stabilized at 750 for almost three months,
with
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falling to 390 for the remainder of the
period
, and it stood static at
this
point again.
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