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The process diagram explains the steps to recycling a

glass

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Overall

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, there are six steps to do

this

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, starting from accumulating the wasted

glass

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, putting the

glass

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in several machines, and ending in delivery. First of all, the process starts

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the recycle bin in each house which contains

glass

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-type rubbish.

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, it will be taken by a truck to a treatment plant where the

glass

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will be processed

further

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While

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in the treatment site,

initially

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, the

glass

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will be put into a washing and sterilising

machine

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where the

glass

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will be made 100% clean from any kind of dirt. After that, it will be crushed with a high-pressure

machine

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and melted with fire in a

machine

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As a result

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this

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will transform the

glass

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to be fluid, and ready to be put in the moulding

machine

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This

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fluid will be shaped

according to

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its original form when it was still a

glass

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Finally

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, the

glass

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is remade again and ready to be distributed to supermarkets with a delivery truck. The process

then

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repeats again to the first one.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words glass, machine with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

179 words

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The diagram below shows how glass is recycled.

You have seen an advertisement for part-time job at a restaurant and want to apply for it. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: describe your experience tell him why you are interested in the job say why you think you would be suitable for the job.

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. write a letter

Many elderly people are no long looked after by their families but put are in nurse homes or care homes. What are the advantages or disadvantages of this trend?

You have arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement