Some students prefer to take a gap year between high school and university, to work or to travel. Do the advantages of this outweight the disavantages?

After graduating from high

schools

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, some students choose to have a break before entering

univerisities

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universities

. They either prefer to take a trip or experience the lifestyle of a worker. Those who want to have a different taste of life

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desire to change a mode from studying or feel sick of reading books

everyday

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.

This

phenomenon does have its pros and cons. As a

student

who has studied for over 10 years, he might be exhausted

of

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academy

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. It won't be a bad choice for him to take a break. As

a

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saying goes," All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." It probably be a good decision for a tired runner to relax if he needs

to begin

another turn. Getting some fresh

idea

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before entering a much harder study level could bring better

outcome

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. Perhaps,

aftering

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after

experienced

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the difficult tasks

in

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work, the

student

will study harder in university, knowing the importance of knowledge.

However

,

this

also

has some side effects.

For example

, others keep learning

while

the

student

is

traveling

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. It surely means his academic improvement is behind most of his friends

for

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some

extents

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. And what if he can not get used to the study mode after entering university

.

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Afterall

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, taking a journey doesn't need much pressure.

On the other hand

, those who choose to work

also

might encounter problems, as their skills and knowledge are not enough compared to

his

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colleages

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colleagues

. It is easy for them to face questions that they might not have the ability to solve.

For

this

reason, their working experience probably

ia

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is

harder than they expected. In my opinion, taking a gap year might

has

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its advantages. But the advantages

are

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not overweight the

disvantages

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disadvantages

. As the peer pressure might be caused, it's like a runner who is always tracing others. Plus, a year without discussing common

topic

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with classmates, it is easy for a person to lose sight. When others are talking

some

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general issues,

this

student

might have no idea what to say. The

embarassment

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embarrassment

also

will cause

come

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some

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physical problems. So for me, I

am not agree

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with the point that the advantages of

gap

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a gap

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year

is overweight

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its

disvantages

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disadvantages

.