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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided bar graph depicts the percentage of
residents
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 in five Australian
cities
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 who engaged in various
coffee
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 and
tea
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 consumption habits over the past four weeks. The habits surveyed include purchasing fresh
coffee
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, buying
instant
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coffee
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, and visiting a café for
coffee
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 or
tea
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.
Overall
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, visiting a café for
coffee
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 or
tea
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 was the most prevalent habit in four of the five
cities
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,
while
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 purchasing fresh
coffee
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 was the least common across all
cities
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.
Additionally
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, buying
instant
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coffee
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 held the second-highest proportion in most
cities
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, except for
Adelaide
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. Specifically, Melbourne and Hobart had the highest percentage of
residents
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 who visited a café for
coffee
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 or
tea
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, each approaching 65%.
In contrast
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,
Adelaide
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 and Brisbane recorded the lowest figures for purchasing fresh
coffee
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, both hovering around 34%. Sydney and Perth
also
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 showed relatively low percentages for
this
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 habit, though slightly higher than
Adelaide
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 and Brisbane. Regarding the purchase of
instant
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coffee
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, the rates varied between 45% and 55% across the
cities
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.
Adelaide
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 stood out as an exception; the majority of its
residents
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 preferred visiting a café, followed by buying
instant
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coffee
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, and only a small fraction purchased fresh
coffee
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.
This
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 trend indicates that
Adelaide
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residents
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 are more inclined towards café visits compared to other
cities
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, where
instant
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coffee
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 purchasing is more common.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words residents, cities, coffee, tea, instant, café, adelaide with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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