The map shows the comparison of changes in the library before and after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The map shows the comparison of changes in the library before and after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the difference in the library before and after a half-decade of renovation
by comparison
.
Overall
, the size of the table has been changed. The categories of articles have been improved from 3 to 7 types.
Moreover
, a
children
's area and computers have been added. Librarian's desk and stairs still remain at the same spot. On the one hand, before the renovation, the categories of books have 3 types fiction, history, and self-help. After renovation, the types of articles had been improved which added kitchen, economics, law, and
children
's books. The table size has been improved from small desks to long desks, but the number of desks has been reduced from 8 to 4.
In addition
, the newspapers and periodicals were removed and changed to films and DVDs.
On the other hand
, the
Children
's area has been added in front of
children's
Correct article usage
the children's
show examples
books and
computer
Correct article usage
a computer
show examples
zone has been created on the front stairs which is beside the films and DVDs.
Also
, the librarian's desk and stairs still remain in the same place which was in front and beside the entrance.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words children with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "improved" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • comparison
  • significant changes
  • modernize
  • technological facilities
  • computer stations
  • digital book borrowing
  • interactive learning
  • family-friendly spaces
  • cafe or lounge area
  • social interaction
  • open spaces
  • flexible seating arrangements
  • collaborative work
  • community events
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