You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Health services are a basic necessity. However, private companies have made them quite costly for ordinary individuals. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh its disadvantages? Write at least 250 words.

Since healthcare is considered a basic need, some people opt to attend

their

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medical needs in

a

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private

health

companies which require too much funds. I believe that it provides more positive

result

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results

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than its drawbacks. On the one hand, one of the negative issues about privately-owned

centers

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is

its

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their

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expensiveness

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.

Therefore

,

patients

are required to pay more compared to public hospitals.

For instance

, the time when I had my blood test checked, I tried having it done in a public

health

institution,

however

, the amount I

payed

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was lesser than that of a private clinic. So, when getting your

health

monitored in a private medical building, it is expected to prepare additional money.

On the contrary

, private

health

centers

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have more advanced machines and technologies, since it is privately funded,

patients

are able to access

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a newly purchased machines

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a newly purchased machine

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used for medical purposes.

Moreover

, these

centers

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do not need to get

an

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approval from

public

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in order to acquire

the

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diagnostic machines.

For instance

,

the

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new version of CT Scan, in the Philippines most of the time, it is the private hospitals that can have

these kind

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at first.

Therefore

, it is more advantageous to have your body

health

checked in private clinics.

Additionally

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this

type of

companies

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company

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provide

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equal and appropriate services. Unlike in

the

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public medical

centers

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where

patients

are usually disregarded, they provide attention and care quickly.

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,

the

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healthcare system in the Philippines, most of the government hospitals require each

patients

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patient

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to wait for a long time because of staff insufficiency.

Furthermore

, some of the admitted

patients

that

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who

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need quick assistance

needs

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to stand still and wait for the medical staff who's attending

another

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patient's concern.

Thus

, the patient-medical staff ratio in a private

health

center

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is reasonable. In conclusion,

although

private

health

sectors give costly medical tests and measures, I believe that there are more benefits in choosing these

health

institutions

becuase

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because

aside from its new technologies,

patients

can

also

receive

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excellent healthcare services.