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The charts below give information about the number of hours that students study each day at five different universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about the number of hours that students study each day at five different universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The rendered charts display information about
students
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 from five different universities,
along with
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 the number of
hours
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 they spent studying on
weekdays
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 and
weekends
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. The
overall
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 trend shows that 
students
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 from 
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university
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University
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 A spend the most
time
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 studying.
In contrast
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, 
university
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 D 
students
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 spend the fewest 
hours
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 on study. As we can see,
students
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 at
University
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 A dedicate almost the same amount of
time
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 to studying on both
weekdays
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 and
weekends
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, making them the most dedicated
students
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overall
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.
On the other hand
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,
students
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 at
University
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 B dedicate 10.6
hours
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 on
weekdays
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 and a slightly lesser 8.6
hours
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 on
weekends
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, positioning them as the second most dedicated
university
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, with
University
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 A coming in second.
Furthermore
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,
university
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 C records the highest number of
hours
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 on
weekdays
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, with 10.6
hours
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,
while
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university
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University
show examples
 D records the lowest number of
hours
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 on
weekends
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, with 7.8
hours
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.
Furthermore
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,
students
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 from
University
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 D dedicate more
time
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 to their studies on
weekdays
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 compared to
weekends
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, making them the
students
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 who spend the least amount of
time
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 studying
overall
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.
University
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 D records a fair amount of 
hours
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 on 
weekdays
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,
that is
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, 10 
hours
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, which compared to 
weekends
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, remains only 6.2 
hours
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "furthermore, overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, hours, weekdays, weekends, university, time with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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