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The charts below give information about the number of hours that students study each day at five different universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The charts below give information about the number of hours that students study each day at five different universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The rendered charts display information about
students
 from five different universities,
along with
 the number of
hours
 they spent studying on
weekdays
 and
weekends
. The
overall
 trend shows that 
students
 from 
university
Capitalize word
University
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 A spend the most
time
 studying.
In contrast
, 
university
 D 
students
 spend the fewest 
hours
 on study. As we can see,
students
 at
University
 A dedicate almost the same amount of
time
 to studying on both
weekdays
 and
weekends
, making them the most dedicated
students
overall
.
On the other hand
,
students
 at
University
 B dedicate 10.6
hours
 on
weekdays
 and a slightly lesser 8.6
hours
 on
weekends
, positioning them as the second most dedicated
university
, with
University
 A coming in second.
Furthermore
,
university
 C records the highest number of
hours
 on
weekdays
, with 10.6
hours
,
while
university
Capitalize word
University
show examples
 D records the lowest number of
hours
 on
weekends
, with 7.8
hours
.
Furthermore
,
students
 from
University
 D dedicate more
time
 to their studies on
weekdays
 compared to
weekends
, making them the
students
 who spend the least amount of
time
 studying
overall
.
University
 D records a fair amount of 
hours
 on 
weekdays
,
that is
, 10 
hours
, which compared to 
weekends
, remains only 6.2 
hours
.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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