You recently borrowed an item of clothing from a friend. While you had this item, it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter you should: • apologise for damaging the item of clothing • explain how it became damaged • say what you will do to fix the problem Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

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Dear Dorin, I am sorry to be writing with some bad news.At moment .

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writeing

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writing

write

you

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to you

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from

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holiday because is a small

problem

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problem

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is about the item of clothing

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you borrowed me.The

problem

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the ski

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jaket

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jacket

is damaged. I am so sorry that

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destroyed the jacket, and

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hope you will understand me. I damaged your

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jaket

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jacket

last

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day .when I was

at ski

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with family.

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jaket

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jacket

was destroyed from my cause.I broke clothing when I came up from

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of the mountain with snowboarding.

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time when I

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a good speed I walked near the trees and I did not feel as

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if jaket

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jaket

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stopped in the tree.At the final of

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the mountain

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mountain

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I realized

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yourd

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your

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jaket

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jacket

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destroyed. I will come home in 3 days and

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first of all ,I will take the

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jaket

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jacket

and will meet with you to resolve the

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cae

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case

you have two

opportunites

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to resolve ,one is I will buy you a new

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jaket

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jacket

or let is take

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the jacket

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to a tailor.You decide. I will be in touch as soon as I am back home. Bye for now,

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coherence cohesion

Try to clarify the expression 'At moment .i writeing you from holiday because is a small problem' to improve coherence. Consider rephrasing as 'I am writing to you from my holiday due to a small issue.'

task achievement

Ensure accurate spelling and grammar. For example, 'jaket' should be 'jacket'. Pay attention to your sentence structure and verb tense, such as 'I writeing you'. Correcting these areas will make your writing clearer.

task achievement

The letter maintains a friendly and apologetic tone suitable for writing to a friend.

greeting and closing

The closing statement provides a reassuring touch, indicating your intent to resolve the issue upon return.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

193 words

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