You recently borrowed an item of clothing from a friend. While you had this item, it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter you should: • apologise for damaging the item of clothing • explain how it became damaged • say what you will do to fix the problem Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Dorin,
I am sorry to be writing with some bad news.At moment .
i
Change the capitalization
I
writeing
Correct your spelling
writing
write
you
Change preposition
to you
from
holiday because is a small Change preposition
on
problem
.This
problem
is about the item of clothing what
you borrowed me.The Correct word choice
that
problem
is as
the ski Correct word choice
that
jaket
is damaged. I am so sorry that Correct your spelling
jacket
i
destroyed the jacket, and Change the capitalization
I
i
hope you will understand me.
I damaged your Change the capitalization
I
jaket
Correct your spelling
jacket
last
day .when I was at ski
with family.Wrong verb form
skiing
Moreover
,your jaket
was destroyed from my cause.I broke clothing when I came up from Correct your spelling
jacket
top
of the mountain with snowboarding.Add an article
the top
In
Change preposition
At
this
time when I has
a good speed I walked near the trees and I did not feel as Wrong verb form
had
Correct word choice
if jaket
jaket
stopped in the tree.At the final of Change the capitalization
Jaket
Add an article
the mountain
a mountain
mountain
I realized Add a comma
mountain,
as
Correct word choice
that
yourd
Correct your spelling
your
jaket
Correct your spelling
jacket
is
destroyed.
I will come home in 3 days and Wrong verb form
was
in
first of all ,I will take the Change preposition
apply
jaket
and will meet with you to resolve the Correct your spelling
jacket
problem
.In this
cae
you have two Correct your spelling
case
opportunites
to resolve ,one is I will buy you a new Correct your spelling
opportunities
jaket
or let is take Correct your spelling
jacket
jacket
to a tailor.You decide.
I will be in touch as soon as I am back home.
Bye for now,Add an article
the jacket
a jacket
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coherence cohesion
Try to clarify the expression 'At moment .i writeing you from holiday because is a small problem' to improve coherence. Consider rephrasing as 'I am writing to you from my holiday due to a small issue.'
task achievement
Ensure accurate spelling and grammar. For example, 'jaket' should be 'jacket'. Pay attention to your sentence structure and verb tense, such as 'I writeing you'. Correcting these areas will make your writing clearer.
task achievement
The letter maintains a friendly and apologetic tone suitable for writing to a friend.
greeting and closing
The closing statement provides a reassuring touch, indicating your intent to resolve the issue upon return.
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