The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These three charts show how sodium,
satured
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saturated
fat and added
suger
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sugar
may be
unhealty
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unhealthy
if eaten too much and at
wrong
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the wrong
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meals. Looking at the first graph, it's possible to see that sodium is mainly integrated at
dinner
, with a
percentage
of 43%, rather than
lunch
, breakfast and
as
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apply
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snack
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snacks
show examples
in
this
order. Regarding the
satured
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saturated
fat, there is a similar situation to the first chart with a
dinner
's
percentage
of 37% and
lunch
as the second meal with a
percentage
of 26%. The third chart shows the average percentages of the added sugar nutrient. Here it's
possibile
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possible
to observe a different situation in which there is the snack meal in
first
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the first
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position with a
percentage
of 42%. 
Dinner
is always in
top
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the top
show examples
2 of most
percentage
meal
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meals
show examples
, in
this
case with a
percentage
of 23% and
at the
end
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end,
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there are
lunch
and breakfast with similar percentages. In conclusion, it's
possibile
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possible
to observe that the meals with the highest
percentage
are
dinner
, snacks,
lunch
and breakfast in
this
order.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words dinner, percentage, lunch with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 9 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average percentages
  • nutrients
  • unhealthy
  • meal
  • typical meals
  • categories
  • high percentage
  • distribution
  • patterns
  • trends
  • nutrient-dense
  • data
  • comparison
  • summarize
  • reporting main features
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