The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007.

The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007.
The line graph illustrates the daily intake of three categories of food between the years 1981 to 2007.
Overall
, the intake of margarine and butter is decreasing day by day,
in contrast
, the low-fat spreads show an increasing pattern. Specifically, starting from 1981, milk was the most preferred drink, getting approximately 140 grams each quarter.
This
trend persisted for up to five years, just before the steady decline that occurred in 1991, which followed until 1996,
Moreover
, the figure as mentioned earlier exhibits fluctuation in the case of margarine, where it dipped below 80 in 1986,
then
again rose to the initial quantity of 100 that was saturated for a long period until recently when it began to fall again.
Whereas
, in the past, people ate only a petite sum of beans, now
this
has changed with a rapid increase in spread eating habits. Interestingly, in ancient times, there was a large gap in people's nutrient requirements,
while
nowadays, statistics demonstrate that
this
phenomenon is merging.
Furthermore
,
this
indicates that modern families are more health-conscious compared to their
older
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • spreads
  • increased
  • decreased
  • stable
  • significantly
  • approximately
  • per capita
  • remarkable
  • peaked
  • experienced
  • started
  • remained
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