Pie chart bellow give information about the house hold expenditures of an average vs family in different years. summarizes the information by selecting and reporting the main features -

The two pie charts below display information about the household expenses of an average family in two different years namely 1970 and 2004.

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the mortgage is the highest expense in both periods, other life expenses are significantly lower in the more recent year . in depth, the mortgage expense in 1970

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approximately a quarter of the household income,

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in 2004 with 50% of the expenditure

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to mortgage,

in contrast

, food , clothing and transport in the year 1970 costs were higher by almost 50%, decreasing from 22% to 10% for clothing , 25% to 10% for food, and 13% to 5% for transport .

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childcare had a dramatic increase starting from 1% in 1970 to 10% in the next period.

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the entertainment expenditure

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unchanged in both years taking up 13% .