The following maps show some of the changes that have taken place in Dubai in recent decades.
The map below gives information about the development of Dubai’s Clock Tower roundabout in recent decades.
Many years ago,
This
roundabout was so simple and the atmosphere around it was totally quiet without any vehicles. But nowaday
, it Correct your spelling
nowadays
becomes
noisier and more crowded with various forms of transportation on the road. Based on the architecture of Wrong verb form
has become
this
roundabout, there used to be normal statues in the center
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centre
and
stayed alone without any decorations. But, there Correct word choice
that
appear
lots of trees with beautiful appearances around Verb problem
are
it
that look more fashionable than the old ones.
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them
Otherwise
, the facilities around the roundabout still have big changes. In the past, There were only two basic buildings and a house with a lot of trees along the lane. At the
present, the government cut down these trees and replaced them with an abundance of modern buildings and landmarks. They cover 80 Correct article usage
apply
percent
of the Change the spelling
per cent
environment
space. That means the atmosphere at present is more polluted than in the past. Even Though the old one looks more simple and unfashionable than the new one, it is suitable for a healthy lifestyle and has a large natural environment space.Replace the word
environmental
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