The following maps show some of the changes that have taken place in Dubai in recent decades.

The following maps show some of the changes that have taken place in Dubai in recent decades.
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The map below gives information about the development of Dubai’s Clock Tower roundabout in recent decades. Many years ago,
This
roundabout was so simple and the atmosphere around it was totally quiet without any vehicles. But
nowaday
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, it
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noisier and more crowded with various forms of transportation on the road. Based on the architecture of
this
roundabout, there used to be normal statues in the
center
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and
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stayed alone without any decorations. But, there
appear
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lots of trees with beautiful appearances around
it
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that look more fashionable than the old ones.
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, the facilities around the roundabout still have big changes. In the past, There were only two basic buildings and a house with a lot of trees along the lane. At
the
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present, the government cut down these trees and replaced them with an abundance of modern buildings and landmarks. They cover 80
percent
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of the
environment
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space. That means the atmosphere at present is more polluted than in the past. Even Though the old one looks more simple and unfashionable than the new one, it is suitable for a healthy lifestyle and has a large natural environment space.
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