The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs illustrate an
island
before and after the building of a tourist area with facilities and services.
Overall
, all the facilities and the touristic infrastructure were constructed on a virgin
island
, so now, it is a beautiful complex with many accommodations to enjoy vacations. Before, the
island
was only a piece of land with palm trees and a small beach to the east. The central part of the
island
was completely deserted, with some trees to the west. At present, the
island
looks extremely different with a lot of construction and a great touristic infrastructure. On the east, the small beach is appropriate for swimming; to the
south
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south,
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a big pier was built with spaces for boats. In the
center
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centre
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of the
island
there is a house that works as a reception; surrounding it, there are a lot of cabins for rent
; and
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;
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to the
north
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north,
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there is a restaurant.
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