The chart below provides information on the number of workers in various occupations who migrated to Australia between 2009 and 2012.
The bar chart compares different experts segmented into four job categories who emigrated to
Australia
in four years, from 2009 to 2012. Looking from an Use synonyms
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that Linking Words
Australia
was the most popular destination for Use synonyms
accountants
in all mentioned years, particularly in 2010 which reached the highest Use synonyms
number
of emigrants.
Looking in more detail at the data in 2009 and 2010, Use synonyms
accountants
, cooks and software engineers relatively showed high tendencies towards working in Use synonyms
Australia
. Use synonyms
In addition
, except Linking Words
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accountants'
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for accountants'
number
, in 2010, the Use synonyms
number
of two others, cooks and software engineers, remained almost steady. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
number
of accounting experts significantly increased in Use synonyms
the
2010.
Moving to 2011 and 2012, the data presented Change the article
apply
the
similar trend just as 2009 and 2010. Correct article usage
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Nonetheless
, the Linking Words
number
of migrants in three careers, Use synonyms
accountants
, cooks and soft engineers, marginally declined from 2011 to 2012. In stark contrast, computer programmers did not consider Use synonyms
Australia
as an emigrating destination Use synonyms
due to
the fact that their Linking Words
number
in these years Use synonyms
were
remarkably low compared to other experts.Change the verb form
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