The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarize the information by estimating and reporting the main feature, and make the comparison where necessary.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. 

Summarize the information by estimating and reporting the main feature, and make the comparison where necessary.
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The maps illustrate the accessible roads for city hospitals, which have developed over two different time periods (2007, and 20100
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, transport facilities increased by creating separate bus stations, car parks, and creating roundabout at the junction of two roads.
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. there has been significant change in the infrastructures related to transport. In 2007, the city hospital was surrounded by a ring
road
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and linked to the hospital
road
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on the south
side
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of the hospital. In hospital roads, there were several bus stoppages on both sides of the
road
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. On the east
side
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of the hospital
road
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, a combined space was allocated for the public and staff to park their cars, and
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road
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was linked with the city
road
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. In 2010, several roundabouts were made where junctions were present in past to facilitate the traffic system.
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, a separate bus station is made on the west
side
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of the hospital
road
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which is linked with roundabouts.
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, A different parking space was created for the public on the east
side
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of the hospital,
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the previous parking space was dedicated to staff only.
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