The diagram below shows the natural circulation of water.

The diagram below shows the natural circulation of water.
The picture illustrates steps in the process of
water
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cycle in natural environments.
Overall
, we can see that the circulation consists of seven stages, showing the non-stop movement of
water
among the atmosphere, the ground, and the rock layer. The natural circulation of
water
begins with
water
dropping down to the ground from clouds in the air in
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of rain or snow.
Then
the fallen
water
is absorbed by trees and plants through their root systems, where it has been conveyed to the underground, becoming a rich source of groundwater after prolonged accumulation.
Next,
some of the groundwater is exploited by human beings through digging wells
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the
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underground
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and has been used for domestic
water
consumption.
While a
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large amount of the
water
gradually gathers in the bedrock and
then
flows into lakes, rivers, and seas all over the world. In the final stage of
water
circulation, the sun plays an important role. Long-term exposure to the sun,
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it possible for
water
to transform into
vapor
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and
finally
gather together as the substantial ingredients of clouds. At that time, a new cycle begins.
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