The diagram below shows the natural circulation of water.
The picture illustrates steps in the process of
water
cycle in natural environments.
Add an article
the water
Overall
, we can see that the circulation consists of seven stages, showing the non-stop movement of water
among the atmosphere, the ground, and the rock layer.
The natural circulation of water
begins with water
dropping down to the ground from clouds in the air in Correct article usage
the forms
forms
of rain or snow. Fix the agreement mistake
form
Then
the fallen water
is absorbed by trees and plants through their root systems, where it has been conveyed to the underground, becoming a rich source of groundwater after prolonged accumulation.
Next,
some of the groundwater is exploited by human beings through digging wells into
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apply
the
undergroundCorrect article usage
apply
,
and has been used for domestic Remove the comma
apply
water
consumption. While a
large amount of the Correct word choice
A
water
gradually gathers in the bedrock and then
flows into lakes, rivers, and seas all over the world. In the final stage of water
circulation, the sun plays an important role. Long-term exposure to the sun, making
it possible for Wrong verb form
makes
water
to transform into vapor
and Change the spelling
vapour
finally
gather together as the substantial ingredients of clouds. At that time, a new cycle begins.Submitted by 18126275033 on
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