You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the number of visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the number of visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The provided bar graph illustrates data about how many tourists visited London Museums in the three categories in the period from 2007 and 2012.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the quantity of Victoria and Albert Museum experienced a considerable rise having become leader , but that of in National Gallery decreased rapidly ,after
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less popular. Interestingly,
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remained almost the same in the British one between 2007 and 2012. As regards the number of bosses in the bar graph throughout the period of 5 years, starting from 2007, it was ,
nevertheless
, at the bottom of the list at 1000000 ,it increased noticeably to 14 million.
However
,
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figure in the National Gallery experienced a sharp decline from 16000000 to 5 million in the 5 years, beginning from 2007, having lost the leader position. When it comes to visitors to the British Museum in the given time ,
then
, it remained almost unchanged between 14 and 12.
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