The maps below show the centre of a small town called islipas it is now and plan for its development. Summarize the informationby selecting and reporting the main features and to make comparisons where relevant to this data.
The given
map
compares information about the buildings in the centre of Islip town now as well as
the future plans for its modernization.
•From an overall
perspective, it can be clearly seen that the future plan is about adding new facilities to the middle of the town and expanding the main road, creating a dual carriageway while
new buildings are expected to be construct
in the town of Islip.
•Change the verb form
be constructed
Firstly
, a round dual carriageway will be construct
around the city centre. Change the verb form
be constructed
Moreover
, there is a plan to change the total structure of the shops located in the north of the map
. In addition
, a new bus station, a shopping centre, a car park, and a
new housing will be added there Remove the article
apply
whereas
the main road inside the area will be converted into a pedestrain
road.
•Correct your spelling
pedestrian
Also
, in
the west side of the Change preposition
on
map
, housing will be shifted to the southwest edge and a new residence will be appeared
beside the park, Wrong verb form
appear
while
the park will be narrowed in size. However
, in
the south side of the Change preposition
on
map
, shops, the school and the residential complex are expected to be unchanged.Submitted by Who is the best? on
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