The world is currently experiencing a dramatic increase in population.
This
could cause major problems that can possibly affect our future. In the paragraphs below, I will go through each of the problems and the solutions.
First of all, the Linking Words
most concerned
point of the increasing Correct word choice
biggest
populations
: Fix the agreement mistake
population
which
is the land problem, dealing Correct pronoun usage
apply
a
massive damage to the affairs in the limited lands. To be more specific, the Remove the article
apply
servere
wound in the country's Correct your spelling
severe
server
economical
state could be predicted; the cost of the land could be introduced to significantly higher prices, Replace the word
economic
due to
the number of demand Linking Words
is
crossing over the amount of the area Unnecessary verb
apply
avaliable
. Correct your spelling
available
According to
the world trend, Linking Words
the
most Correct article usage
apply
lands
Fix the agreement mistake
land
are
becoming more and more expensive each year. The solution could not be as simple as expanding the country's Correct subject-verb agreement
is
its
own land, which is almost an impossible task to execute. The only solution is to reduce the Correct pronoun usage
apply
further
expansion Linking Words
in
the population; Change preposition
of
restricting
the number of kids in each family.
Change preposition
by restricting
Secondly
, the risk Linking Words
in
each Change preposition
of
individuals
losing a job; Fix the agreement mistake
individual
Linking Words
this
is Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
Linking Words
an
one of the major Change the article
apply
concern
. In effect, more and more people will be fighting for Fix the agreement mistake
concerns
the
place in some of the Correct article usage
a
company
; trying to achieve their quality lives. Fix the agreement mistake
companies
This
creates Linking Words
the
massive gap Correct article usage
a
in
between the low and Change preposition
apply
high
Add a hyphen
high-income
income
Use synonyms
family
; creating Fix the agreement mistake
families
this
gap would trigger Linking Words
the
Correct article usage
an
economical
crisis that could Replace the word
economic
be leading
to Wrong verb form
lead
the
national corruption. Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
, the crisis can possibly destroy all the growing Linking Words
business
in the country, which is most likely to make the situation worse. To counter from letting Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
this
happen, we have to block the creation of Linking Words
Linking Words
this
Correct determiner usage
these
economical
state gaps in the first place. The solution is to support the Replace the word
economic
low
Add a hyphen
low-income
income
populations; the budget gathered from taxes placed on Use synonyms
high
Add a hyphen
high-income
income
houses, Use synonyms
it
can be used Correct pronoun usage
apply
in supporting
the lower classes.
Change preposition
to support
To conclude
, the problem in increasing populations can be summarized as the limitations of the lands: and the expanding gap between the poor and rich. To prevent the risks in Linking Words
these phenomenon
from Change the determiner
this phenomenon
these phenomena
occuring
, we have to limit the number of kids and Correct your spelling
occurring
placing
taxes on the Wrong verb form
place
high
Add a hyphen
high-income
income
classes.Use synonyms
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