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Online education is becoming increasingly popular. many university students are choosing to study online instead of face to face. Do the advantages of distance education outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowdays
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the
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technology has provided benefits to society, distance learning is an example of that,
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 as the flexibility in scheduling and location and the
oportunities
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opportunities
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technology´s
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 tools. In my
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 online learning has more benefits and
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 essay will discuss two main reasons why. First of all, students around the world can take classes
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 their houses or any comfortable place thanks to E-learning,
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, it helps to save
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 in traffic. Some people regret
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the
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 that spend to travel for studying or the distance that they have to move.
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, in
Colombia
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 many
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children
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 do not go to school
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 so far
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 their houses.
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, learning can be faster thanks to the tools that
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 the technology. During the classes learners people have the
oportunity
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opportunity
 to search and take solutions
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 their questions on
internet
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 and dive into the subject´s topic,
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 digital resources show information
in
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 any
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, when I am studying
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 with my professor, I can look strategies for improving my
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communication
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, virtual learning provides some advantages to individuals, who want to learn whichever subject around the world
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 as flexibility in location and E-learning tools.

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task achievement
Aim to develop your points more thoroughly to enhance your clarity and depth of argument. Providing more specific examples and explanations can strengthen your response.
coherence cohesion
Try to enhance your logical structure by ensuring smoother transitions between ideas. Using clear linking phrases can help improve cohesion.
task achievement
Your essay successfully addresses the topic of online education, presenting clear viewpoints.
coherence cohesion
You have included both an introduction and a conclusion, which frame your essay well.
task achievement
You provided relevant examples, like the one about Colombia, which supports your main points.

Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Distance learning
  • E-learning platforms
  • Virtual classrooms
  • Traditional education
  • Digital resources
  • Self-paced learning
  • Asynchronous learning
  • Blended learning
  • Technological infrastructure
  • Student engagement
  • Time management
  • Cost-effective
  • Geographical barriers
  • Networking opportunities
  • Face-to-face interaction
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