The chart below provides information on the number of workers in various occupations who migrated to Australia between 2009 and 2012.

The chart below provides information on the number of workers in various occupations who migrated to Australia between 2009 and 2012.
The bar graph illustrates data about the number of employees in 4 different majors who migrated to Australia from 2009 to 2012.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the aggregate of accountants was massively the topmost,
whereas
, the total of computer programmers was enormously the least.
According to
the information presented, the accountants in 2009 were nowhere near as astronomical as in 2010, with 20 compared to 28
thousand
workers respectively,
however
, in 2011, the accountants (22
thousand
) were not quite as high as in 2012 (21
thousand
).
Additionally
, the cookers fluctuated all over the 4 years starting from 17
thousand
and finished decreasingly by 16
thousand
.
Besides
, Software engineers were amazingly rising from 2009 (19) until 2011 (21),
on the other hand
, the digit of workers reduced to 17
thousand
in 2012.
In addition
, computer programmers in 2009 were not as formidable as in 2005, with 2 against 5
thousand
in order.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words thousand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Migration patterns
  • Occupation categories
  • Significant growth
  • Labor shortages
  • Booming industries
  • Visa regulations
  • Job market saturation
  • Economic downturns
  • Skill shortages
  • Economic contribution
  • Infrastructure pressure
  • Technological advancements
  • Global economic predictions
  • Policy changes
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