It is predicted that robots are going to become increasingly important in our lives. How could robots be used in the future? Will this development be a positive or a negative development?
In today's contemporary world, it is assumed that
robots
will be an essential part of our lives. It can be used in various fields, like medical treatments. Use synonyms
Although
there are some negative sides to Linking Words
robots
, they can used positively by making a balance with human activities.
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To begin
with, Linking Words
robots
are used in multifarious tasks in our daily lives. If these sophisticated technologies were not available, it would be so difficult to complete critical surgeries in our bodies. Use synonyms
For instance
, previously, heart operations would be completed through a high-risk process, as there were no medical Linking Words
robots
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however
, these are now done without any injuries. Linking Words
Moreover
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robots
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also
created the chance to do household chores, so many old people do not need any workers in their houses, whom they would substantial amount of money.
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In addition
, many Linking Words
robots
are now used in industries, where they can contribute to finishing heavy and dangerous work, which may not be possible by humans. Use synonyms
For example
, in steel industries, Linking Words
robots
can work in high-temperature environments (more than 100 degrees Celsius), where humans can tolerate only 40 degrees Celsius. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, as they do not need any rest, they can complete more work at a time than mankind. Linking Words
As a result
, companies not only have the chance to increase their production at a significant rate but Linking Words
also
enable them to make more profits.
In conclusion, even though there are some drawbacks of Linking Words
robots
, as they are so costly, and take human jobs; Use synonyms
nevertheless
, they are creating more livelihood opportunities Linking Words
also
for the people. Linking Words
Besides
, they are saving people's lives, as they can complete high-risk operations safely; so, Linking Words
this
development is positive, if we can create a bridge with humans.Linking Words
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Try to provide a clearer balance of arguments assessing both the positive and negative effects of robots.
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The essay contains well-supported examples, especially about the use of robots in surgeries and industrial work.
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A clear introduction and conclusion provide a good structure to the essay.
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