The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarize the information by estimating and reporting the main feature, and make the comparison where necessary.
The following maps illustrate the entering road of the hospital in the 3-year period of time from 2007 to 2010.
Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that urban hospitals became
more comfortable to access and developed over the years. The most noticeable change was the bus station and parking lots.
Wrong verb form
have become
According to
the figure, in 2007, there was a car park for the staff and public which was eliminated and a bigger one was added in the northern east side of the given data. The other one evacuated to just below the hospital. In the southern west side, the bus stop was 6 in 2007 which was uninstalled in 2010.
As for remaining, the road was completely changed and the travelling system to access. 2 roundabout roads were installed on the middle side of the map.Submitted by Zolboo on
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