The graph shows the percentage of female members of Parliament in European countries between 2000 and 2012.

The graph shows the percentage of female members of Parliament in European countries between 2000 and 2012.
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The line graph compares data about
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's membership in European countries' parliaments between 2000 and 2012.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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in Germany more female participants were in the parliament than in other places.
Furthermore
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, number of members in the United Kingdom sharply increased. At the outset,
although
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4% of participants were
women
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in 2000 in the UK,in 2004
this
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number doubled.
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, in 2008 the percentage of
women
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sharply went up to 20% and after 4 years,
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number slightly climbed. At the beginning of the 21st century, 25% of French
women
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worked in the parliament,
however
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after 8 years,their percentage came to 29%.
Moreover
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, in 2012 they filled to approximately, 32%.
Nonetheless
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, 17% of female workers were in Belgium in 2000. It changed to 24% in 2008 and it fell to 22%
at the end
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of the period. If 24% of people in parliament were in Italy in 2000, it grew to 34% in 2008,though it jumped to 39% in 2012.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words women with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • parliament
  • gender equality
  • trends
  • percentage
  • significant progress
  • minimal progress
  • yearly analysis
  • country-specific
  • events
  • elections
  • policies
  • initiatives
  • speculating
  • predictive
  • representation
  • tracking
  • issues
  • addressing
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