International travelers can cause problems in the countries to which they travel. On the other hand, international travelers can bring real advantages with them. Do the problems international travelers cause greater than the advantages they bring?

From some

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's perspective,

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can be rude, too vulgar, or probably just

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havoc wherever they go. Yet, most

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still

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them with open arms.

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essay will elucidate both the reasons behind those negative sentiments and what kind of benefits

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will bring. The primary factor for

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sentiment is, of course, the cultural differences of every country. Take

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,

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not used to beers and bikinis on the beach until the

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came from Australia and any other countries that

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after

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as Japanese, Europeans, etc. It was a culture shock for The Balinese, yet as

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time

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by they started to get used to it.

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transporation

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transportation

infrastructure is not as well developed as other cities,

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are allowed to rent

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a motorbike

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for use of transportation.

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is causing quite a huge stir of problems since some of the renters

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even have

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license to drive a motorbike

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with. Violations

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as breaking the red lights, parking

wherever that's prohibited, and speeding too much

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are sometimes too common to see in

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these days.

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, despite all the problems that

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, there are still greater benefits to be obtained.

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Bali

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economic growth.

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, the cultural exchange that was brought with it

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improve

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's value as it widen the horizon of anyone who visits. For starters, most of the natives these days are able to speak more than one foreign language quite fluently. The most common language that they were fluent

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is likely to be English and Japanese. All things considered, to reap more benefits rather than reaping more recurring problems,

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government

intervention is crucial. There

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to be a strict law and

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law should be communicated to the

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who have any intention to

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. Both the

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and the law enforcement should

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hand in hand to make a safe and comfortable place for international travelling.