The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufactures in the years 2005 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.)

The table illustrates the proportion of global market

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of the mobile phone for production between 2005 and 2006.

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the largest market

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between 2005 and 2006, followed by

Motorola

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and Samsung,

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Mobile had the lowest

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. The

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of

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was generally the outstanding highest number

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among

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all the other

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in both years. The highest proportion of

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held by

Nokia

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with 32.5% in 2005

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followed by

Motorola

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and Samsung with 17.7% and 12.7% respectively. The

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of the

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in 2006

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and

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35% of

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sales in 2006 and 21.1%

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Motorola

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.

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increased their

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of Samsung

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from 12.7% in 2005 to 11.8% in 2006. The lowest number of shares was

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mobile with 4.9% in 2005, followed by Sony Ericsson and L.G with 6.3% and 6.7% respectively. The

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of L.G and

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were continuing

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to decline in 2006, which

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Mobile

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about 2.9% of their proportion and L.G

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6.3% in 2006. Constantly, the

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of Sony Ericsson

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increased from 6.3% in 2005 to 7.4% in 2006.