The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufactures in the years 2005 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)

The table illustrates the proportion of global market

share

of the mobile phone for production between 2005 and 2006.

Overall

,

Nokia

was

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the largest market

share

between 2005 and 2006, followed by

Motorola

and Samsung,

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Mobile had the lowest

share

. The

share

of

Nokia

was generally the outstanding highest number

amount

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among

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all the other

companies

in both years. The highest proportion of

share

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held by

Nokia

with 32.5% in 2005

and

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followed by

Motorola

and Samsung with 17.7% and 12.7% respectively. The

percentage

of the

share

in 2006

were

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increased in both

of

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Nokia

and

Motorola

companies

, which resulted

to be

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35% of

Nokia

sales in 2006 and 21.1%

of

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for

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Motorola

.

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,

while

the other

companies

were

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increased their

number of

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market

share

, the

percentage

of Samsung

were drop

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dropped

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from 12.7% in 2005 to 11.8% in 2006. The lowest number of shares was

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mobile with 4.9% in 2005, followed by Sony Ericsson and L.G with 6.3% and 6.7% respectively. The

percentage

of L.G and

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companies

were continuing

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to decline in 2006, which

resulted

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resulted in

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Mobile

to

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only

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having

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about 2.9% of their proportion and L.G

to

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only

have

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having

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6.3% in 2006. Constantly, the

percentage

of Sony Ericsson

were

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increased from 6.3% in 2005 to 7.4% in 2006.